PaulsInfinity's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Healer needs healing]

Good piece, has a charming style to it and a well execution of emotion on simple figures; Although the composition could be a bit better, currently it feels to dull and doesn't do the rim lighting or well the lighting in general justice. I slightly altered the piece and colors to give an example of how I would do the lighting https://i.imgur.com/tCusV1H.jpg Hope ya don't mind

ZeTrystan responds:

Good point. Though I usually prefer pastel shades to the intensity in lighting, I get what you mean. ;)

[D.Va Overwatch - Getting Off - Cartoon PinUp Commission]

The quality of this artwork is great, good gesture and neat colors, although I feel like you strayed away from the original character design too much, Take away the ear piece and it won't resemble as D.va anymore. In my opinion I feel like you could have executed the character design in your style a lot better.

[Bath time]

Hey, first I want to say good job on the painting of the rocks you did well there. unfortunately that's the only positive thing I can say about this piece. The main issue here is that you're over blending colors and not letting the hues that bring out value taking place making it look flat and muddy. I altered this piece a bit just to show what I mean : https://i.imgur.com/Zlxpcpm.jpg Aside from anatomy errors (Butt is too saggy) that's all the critique i can give.

AberrantError responds:

Sweet dude! Ill work on it. thank you

[The Walk]

This piece overall is pretty well executed and everything goes together, although I feel like the gesture was lost on the character. She feels stiff and the more i look at her the more it feels like she doesn't fit in well there.

Dahlia-K responds:

Thankyou. I will do better next time